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Lulu and her Nose

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Notes from my edits;

Paragraph One;
    •    What does Lulu’s nose look like where we can describe it with one word and replace the second use of nose? Is it pert or is that too cutsie? How memorable do we want her nose to be? Should it be her defining facial feature? When login details are received, create a face for Lulu on FaceYourManga.

Guess how far in this is? In the prologue.

Yeah…

This is exhausting. Where my third cup of tea be at? Tea…

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Author: Bonnie

Between a blogging addiction, hosting reading challenges, reviewing, writing novels, and overcoming a neuro-immune disease, Bonnie attempts to do as many awesome things as she can and has a good dose of daily bunny cuddles. She resides in Western Sydney with her rabbit, Winston.

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